Thread:Aphrodite Belleza/@comment-38520680-20190214083411/@comment-38520680-20190307094630

And this last bit:

'''What sort of story was the rough manuscript you initially brought in? '''



          The part about learning the House’s secret and resolving to escape was the same. Emma wanted to save everybody, but she wasn’t as adamant about everyone escaping together as she is now. In the midst of that, Ray betrayed them, Norman got shipped out, and Emma’s leg was broken. Krone was in it, and that cliff around the farm was there, too. Then, under circumstances where it looked as if it would be hard for even one person to get out, Emma left the House, met Sonju and Musica, heard about the two worlds and the promise with the demons from a thousand years ago, and set off for her next destination… That was as far as it went, and there were fifteen chapters in all. I drew the story up to the escape as briefly as possible and took it in as a presentation; that was the prototype. Looking back, it seems clumsy. (Shirai)